the piece that i have wrote is a poem that is my favorite i have ever written here is one page of the four i wrote.
happiness…
If you just think in silence…
As silent as a toddler as he sleeps…
And think about the past…
And just live life to the fullest…
Forget about all of the bad things...
Forget about the drama, hate, anger, and enemies…
You find a hidden place in your heart…
It’s peaceful, joyful, quiet, and heartwarming…
Like an old story you forgot about…
Like a refreshing drink of water after playing in the sun…
Joy, happiness, love, and care…
Don’t worry…
It will be there, always forever and ever…
Like a love story that ends happily, ever, after…
It is the one thing that picks you up when you fall down…
When you are crying, sad, or depressed…
Just think and stare blank into the wall…
Into the past and the future…
What your life depends on…
Who your friends are…
Are they using you...?
Or are they real friends that love you…
Who matters most in life…?
the genre of this is a poem to help others think and its about life and how to live it well and to keep you happy in sad situations. it is my favorite because it took 2 weeks to write and i put a lot of thaught into it. my ideas came to me because i was sad from my friend dying and i needed to open up.
ReplyDeleteThe piece I would like to revise is my science cinquain called The Liver. I need to have it make more since about what I mean when I use the characteristics about them.
ReplyDeleteThe Liver
When I think of it, it makes me oozy (stomach turning)
Nasty, gooey, and rubbery (loose and gooey like goop or jelly)
It moves any way it is like soap (gooey and very slippery)
The first time I heard of it I about through up (made me very sick to my stomach)