Kirt Cobain

Kurt Cobain
• birth date- February 20, 1967
• birth place- Aberdeen, Washington
• parents- Donald Leland Cobain and Wendy Elizabeth Freedenberg
• fun facts- was in the top band of 1985 Nirvana and was definitely a rock legend
• information- He was definitely what we call a pot head and did a lot of drugs and hanging out with girls in his years and died of a suicide attempt in a locked room with a gun when he was “high” or overdosed on Cocaine
• present location- Dead
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kurt_Cobain#Death

Lil' wayne

I picked Lil' Wayne because he is one of the top rappers of all time and he has very great tallent. he has been one of my favorites since this summer when i heard his top 10 hit forever ft. drake. he is the best of the best this year sais new york times.


• Real Name- Dwayne (Lil’ Wayne) Carter
• Nick-Name- Lil’ Wheezy
• Birth Date- 9/27/1982
• Birth Place- New Orleans, Louisiana, U.S.A
• Parents- Dwayne carter sr. + Jocita carter
• Fun Facts- he has been arrested twice for possession of a controlled substance once and another time for speeding in his Lamborghini the day he got it and resisting arrest.
• Information- he was In hurricane Katrina in new Orleans and then he started his rapping carrer.
• Present Location- Hollywood California U.S.A

Lil' wayne

Lil’ Wayne
• Real Name- Dwayne (Lil’ Wayne) Carter
• Nick-Name- Lil’ Wheezy
• Birth Date- 9/27/1982
• Birth Place- New Orleans, Louisiana, U.S.A
• Parents- Dwayne carter sr. + Jocita carter
• Fun Facts-
• Information-
• Present Location- Hollywood California U.S.A

The piece I would like to revise is my science cinquain called The Liver. I need to have it make more since about what I mean when I use the characteristics about them.
The Liver

When I think of it, it makes me oozy (stomach turning)

Nasty, gooey, and rubbery (loose and gooey like goop or jelly)

It moves any way it is like soap (gooey and very slippery)

The first time I heard of it I about through up (made me very sick to my stomach)

The piece I would like to revise is my science cinquain called The Liver. I need to have it make more since about what I mean when I use the characteristics about them.
The Liver

When I think of it, it makes me oozy (stomach turning)

Nasty, gooey, and rubbery (loose and gooey like goop or jelly)

It moves any way it is like soap (gooey and very slippery)

The first time I heard of it I about through up (made me very sick to my stomach)

In language arts I learned alot about smiley face tricks and awwuuubbiss in thefirst simmester so now I am , Writing better, Getting better grades, And I'm even getting happier from my grades.

I learned about myself that I am way better at typeing and writing when I am paying attention to my work instad of friends. it is way easier for me when I have better grades to keep them up.

in my second simester i need to work on staying at a b a range for my grades and no infractions at all so i get to go to the infraction party at the end of the last 2 quarters like last year and get root beer floats every quarter.

the piece that i have wrote is a poem that is my favorite i have ever written here is one page of the four i wrote.

happiness…
If you just think in silence…
As silent as a toddler as he sleeps…
And think about the past…
And just live life to the fullest…
Forget about all of the bad things...
Forget about the drama, hate, anger, and enemies…
You find a hidden place in your heart…
It’s peaceful, joyful, quiet, and heartwarming…
Like an old story you forgot about…
Like a refreshing drink of water after playing in the sun…
Joy, happiness, love, and care…
Don’t worry…
It will be there, always forever and ever…
Like a love story that ends happily, ever, after…
It is the one thing that picks you up when you fall down…
When you are crying, sad, or depressed…
Just think and stare blank into the wall…
Into the past and the future…
What your life depends on…
Who your friends are…
Are they using you...?
Or are they real friends that love you…
Who matters most in life…?